I like!
It definitely has a nice feel, and could be an instant classic but for a few missteps in choosing sounds. The piano needs more reverb and release, and the hat at the beginning needs a replacement or more reverb.
Not to say I didn't like it, it was really good, a worthy addition to the trance genre.
For once in a trance song the length is perfect, it never overstays its welcome, and it adds to the song each time it goes through the chorus. The kick here is good as well, present enough so you can always hear it, yet unobtrusive enough so that you don't always notice it.
I'd say you have a lot of talent, you just might want to get advice from someone on piano tuning for trance, and you have potential to be right up there with the best.
Best of luck for the future!
P.S. I'm the guy above you on the frontpage with the song "Aftermath", and I wouldn't mind a listen ;)
-Pants