BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
This is the lowest score I've ever heard on Newgrounds, and the thing is, it doesn't deserve it.
It sure as hell doesn't deserve ten, but I just wanted to say thanks for .... wait do I even know you?
Anyway, DONT keep this up, you could try putting a little more effort into your next submission.
It made me laught though.
-Pants
If you acually heard the guitars then you would have knew I put effort into it.
I dubbed everything out with the voices to fuck everything up.
Thanks for the review.
It's nice...
Though the guitar is awesome, you lose points for crappy drums.
Still a nice tune to relax to though.
Nice Job!
-Pants
the drums have majorly fucked up my other song too, though the guitar is much nicer :D
Hey...
Me again.
The beat isn't too original, and it does get repetitive, but a lot of it works.
Though the whole first part of the song does seem pretty useless as anything other than an overly long intro, (you could probably have started the whole thing at 1:50 and been just fine) the REAL song starting at 2:17 is much more smooth and coherant.
Nice
You kept it pretty simple here, and it's not a bad effort, I just feel that you could do with some editing in most of your tracks.
Oh, and if you have the time, would you please review my latest song?
Thanks.
-Pants
Good point about the intro, I didnt realy like it either. I am still going to go back and work on the drums some more and do some other things to it. Thanks for the review, Ill be sure to check your new song to.
Very nice...
The sounds that come in about 33 seconds, are pretty much what I've been working on achieving for a little while; the simple drum rythem coupled with the classical feel is pretty much my favorite type of music.
But this piece gets ten because around 2:13, just about the coolest funk sounds thinkable come in, and now i'm grinning like a hyena.
But the song deviates once again at 3:20, when some sort of ultra-awesome techno-rap type sounds pump up the wow factor even more, I also like the distortion at the end.
You know, with a running time of almost six minutes, you could really split this up into three different, but equally awesome, songs. That's something I would line up to hear!
Very nice indeed.
-Pants
thanks for the great review man ...that BAM funk part your talking abou i didnt even know it was going to go in a funky way till i was messing around with WA-WA guitar samples...and from there i just added a lil more funk......the end im still not happy with but im at a loss as to what to do but thank you for the ten and i hope to get more reviews from ya soon
Wow...
I'm impressed, this got my attention in a hurry!
I love how the first part is so muted, it kinda sounds like it's under a blanket.
And then the beat came in, well timed, not too repetitive . Needs expanding on imo, I never heard the first one, but there's definate;y more that could be done with this.
I think a carefully finished product could almost be on par with Envy's Heaven.
You pass mixing with an A.
Keep it up.
-Pants
Wow, really? Thanks! I have to keep working on it though. Gah, I do need to get more creative with my sounds though. I'm not doing bad with that so far though, those drums were mine :p
-Yeah, more could be done, but I doubt I'll do it, I have another project in the mix, and I'm sure it'll be great cause it's original :)
-ImperfectDisciple
Hey...
Something about this just hit a nerve or something, at the end of the song I was just sitting there with this huge sloppy grin on my face.
I love how un-tecnhological the whole thing is, sounds like cell phone game music.
Very original.
-Pants
hehe thats how i was when i finished the song, hey thanks for the postive review!
-Crsttarocks
well...
As a song it's not great, but the idea behind it is awsome!
Very creative.
The mixing and editing is incredible.
Sweet job!
-Pants
sweet!
Had some nice sounds, but also some weird kinds of twists and turns. Works pretty well for the most part though. The end was my favorite part.
Not bad at all!
P.S. You are below me in the audio advertisement thread, think you could review some of my stuff?
Catch you later,
-Pants
Thanks alot! I might check out some of your stuff too :)
I love the intro...
I voted five.
Though the song does get a tad repetitive,(maybe some fx needed?) I give it a ten because it departs from the norm in techno, and because the piano is awesome!
Techno isn't usually relaxing, but I found this to be very soothing.
Good job!
-Pants
Thanks Pants, I appreciate your review. I do need to go back and add a couple flourishes here and there. I do hope (when making techno at least) to depart from the norm because you hear a lot of the same on here in those types of genres. While they're good, it's nice to have something different. So I really do appreciate it. Thanks again!
~SinJim
Hey...
You know what I've always loved in a piece just like this? Do everything pretty much like you have, then towards the end just when everything is building, just let it drop naturally. THEN kick in the drums and maybe add a guitar or some synth.
Those are just my thoughts, it's pretty good now, Just needs some building.
And yes, I did also think of vampires.
P.S. I have just uploaded again, it's pretty cool this time.
-Pants
Thanks pants, that's a pretty sweet idea. I think I'd like that. You should put in some drums and make it sick. I can see it developing into a pretty big piece.
I did really need suggestions for this one as it's short and really just an intro. Let me know what you think about drums.
Thanks for the review!
~SinJim
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